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A bed of golden rosesA bed of golden roses
By Jake Raines
Jake was in the bedroom on his bed crying over what a horrible day he was having his eyes of tears like a waterfall on a river in a forest he had his eyes sealed shut and wanted to cry all his tears away until it was finally over. Why can everyone just understand that it’s not always about the outfits or looks? He asked himself in sorrow, Suddenly the door crack opened slowly and there was DJ his loving hardworking husband that he is happily married to DJ saw Jake on the bed and quietly approached him slowly.
DJ put his hand on his shoulder and Jake stopped and looked back
Jake, is everything ok? He asked No I’m not okay, Teddy Bear Jake replied
today was a horrible day at work none of the audience on the today’s magicians show weren’t cheering for me at all and I’m very hurt and upset for that I just wish this town that we’re living in would just enjoy the show and not criticized what I’m wearing or what th
A Guide to Writing DialogueWhat is dialogue, exactly? The definition from Merriam-Webster’s dictionary was several lines long, so I shall summarize it in a short sentence for the sake of the readers; it’s the writing that illustrates conversations between two or more characters in a story. We read and hear it all around us, but creating it in your own work can be a challenge. However, if you find dialogue an obstacle in your writing, then don’t push the panic button. In this tutorial, you’ll find by analyzing what dialogue can do and how to use it, you can turn your greatest fear into your greatest ally in your story.
What dialogue is
Like I’ve asserted before, dialogue is basically what the characters are saying to each other. It can be found in multiple mediums such as books, movies, comics, video games, etc. We even engage in dialogue daily without even thinking. When you talk to your best friend, a co-worker, or even your dog, you create dialogue. It’s exchang
five.Five is the number of times you worry he’s stopped breathing, as the surgeons carve around his heart, twisting away the plaque ridden arteries, and pulling a vein out of his leg. Five is the number of heart wrenching hours you and your family were waiting in the hospital room, worried that your lives would crumble, that there would be five members of the family instead of six, that five days out of the week he would not come home for dinner, that five kisses from him would no longer be given to his wife and four children. Five was the amount of fingernails you bit off while watching people enter and exit the waiting room, and the amount of minutes your mother spent on the phone, explaining that something was wrong. Five is the critical difference between holding a father’s hand as your mother cries into his heart shaped pillow. The difference between rejoicing and smiling weakly because he’s okay or carrying your father’s American-flag-covered-casket and watchin
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